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标题: 清教英语高手 [打印本页]

作者: dzcdzc 时间: 2007-3-20 17:22
标题: 清教英语高手
Dear sir/madam:

Do you received the Invitation for Bids about optical mirror? If you are interseted in this project, please contacted us as soon as possible. The registation time is numbered.

P.S.
1. Attached please find the Technical Specifications of this Bid.

Best regards,

请问以上一段书信有没有什么错误，尽快，谢谢了！！

作者: willzhao 时间: 2007-3-20 21:17
对不起,俺不会,路过,进来学一下!呵呵!等高手吧! [s:1]

作者: flygreed 时间: 2007-3-21 11:38
我不是高手，我回你一贴。

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1. please contact  (not contacted ).....

2. technical specifications detailed as per attachment of  this bid (是不是好一些)

3.  ".............as soon as possible. The registation time is numbered....."

   招标是很严肃的事情，应将具体时间写清楚，如果是事先联系投标人，也应将预计时间写出来

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仅供参考！

作者: dzcdzc 时间: 2007-3-21 14:44
谢谢楼上！

英语很久不用，看来要专门补补了。

作者: dzcdzc 时间: 2007-3-21 14:48
单位一位同事给我纠正了一个语法错误：
Do you received----〉Did you receive

作者: lytrans 时间: 2007-3-23 13:40
原文:
Dear sir/madam:

Do you received the Invitation for Bids about optical mirror? If you are interseted in this project, please contacted us as soon as possible. The registation time is numbered.

P.S.
1. Attached please find the Technical Specifications of this Bid.

修改后:
Do you received the ,从语法上讲是不对的,修改为Did you received the...,不过你说这句话的意思是想问她有没有收到,是对现在的影响,所以最好用现在完成时.Have you received the ....

please contacted us ．．please后面一般用原形please contact us..语气委婉一些可以考虑would you please contact us.

1. Attached please .attached最好改成attachment.

仅供参考

作者: nichole.tin 时间: 2007-4-13 15:48
看样子大家都找到毛病了！！！
我觉得就前面两句有语病，其他倒没啥。

作者: iceshang 时间: 2007-4-24 20:44
进来学习下，英语大学毕业后就没用过了。

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